This is really, really, amazingly, fantastically, mind-bogglingly, ass-explodingly good. But I wonder, how would a ten year old child react to disemboweling a person. Is he traumatized, like Ed really sadistic, or what? Maybe to answer this question you could have an interview log between the psychiatrist and the Candle wax child. And then introduce him to the terror bites
If the interview ever happens, I'm auditioning my character.
Send Message | Regeneration's a lottery.
So long as you aren't maimed or wounded in the process
okay, maybe just a little bit…
Well, I still have a bit more elaboration to do, but what I have planned is that we've found he has no recollection of his many, many murders. Of course I do have a few things planned that might change your opinion on the matter.
Maybe.
We'll see.
Victor Strate | "If you ever get in a gunfight with somebody, just make sure to keep aiming for his groin until you've hit it at least once. That way, even if you lose your life in the fight, that bastard'll never breed."
No! Not a cliffhanger, don't you dare. Don't You Dare!
DON'T. YOU. DARE!
For this offense I will feed thee to the Lord of Torment, and laugh as your ash is scattered amongst his dominion. Hahahahaha!
*cough*
Sorry, I stole part of Eds lunch today, must be something in it.
I've made a minor edit with a little something interesting that'll keep you fed happy for a while.
Victor Strate | "If you ever get in a gunfight with somebody, just make sure to keep aiming for his groin until you've hit it at least once. That way, even if you lose your life in the fight, that bastard'll never breed."
I just read what you put up.
I now have an image of a super pissy 10 year old ripping out someones intestines as his screams fill the air…
And then I pan left to see you poking it with a stick while the rest of us take notes.
You may have just made my day…
Sounds about right.
Victor Strate | "If you ever get in a gunfight with somebody, just make sure to keep aiming for his groin until you've hit it at least once. That way, even if you lose your life in the fight, that bastard'll never breed."
I reread your thing and saw some stuff
- As Cad recently enlightened me to, if you have a number less than nine, don't the the (number here) thing.
- I don't think it should be BETA's, I think they are too important to be doing grunt work, but that's just me.
Fixing both of those things.
Also, thanks. All the input I get helps.
Victor Strate | "If you ever get in a gunfight with somebody, just make sure to keep aiming for his groin until you've hit it at least once. That way, even if you lose your life in the fight, that bastard'll never breed."
…I'm always watching.
Oh, and on a serious note, I know you say it doesn't respond when its disembowling stuff, but what would happened if we interfered with the assault?
Ooooooh, good one. I'll get to it.
…Once I'm done taking out the trash and packing for my move.
Victor Strate | "If you ever get in a gunfight with somebody, just make sure to keep aiming for his groin until you've hit it at least once. That way, even if you lose your life in the fight, that bastard'll never breed."
This is incredibly horrifying. It would be a tragedy if one of us Senior Staff would get stuck with it during a blackout or a lockdown.
Send Message | Regeneration's a lottery.
Thanks to that post my next tale will be you locked in a room with this thing for two months.
Good job.
Victor Strate | "If you ever get in a gunfight with somebody, just make sure to keep aiming for his groin until you've hit it at least once. That way, even if you lose your life in the fight, that bastard'll never breed."